The Macbeth plot was checked cold on paper at about 4 of 10 steps, its middle rebuilt by question, and a first character map redrawn from memory at 6/6 people and 3/4 arrows. Ran block 5, 11:02-12:00, with the parent's paper pilot (strip and map on paper, checkpoints in chat), one break 11:32-11:34. Strip: 8 min, five boxes drawn not ten, 4 filled, 1 blank. Rebuilt with narrowed questions: Banquo's murder and two reasons, ghost, witches and 'born of a woman', Macduff's family. Lady Macbeth's death wrong ('killed', then 'poisoned', 'poisoned' kept after being told otherwise); guilt reached with a sentence frame. Map: six names and four verbs in one message stalled at 8 min with 'i can't'; released one arrow at a time, then redrawn from blank. 19 items set, 17 attempted, 1 'i can't', 1 not answered at the stop. Stopped at her 'time up' at 12:00: paragraph, spellings and her two closing lines not reached.
FIRST, finish what was cut on 2 Nov: her two closing lines, then spell ghost, friend, decide and panics cold, one per message. Then the whole Macbeth plot on paper again, ten boxes already numbered and drawn before the timer starts, 8 min, nothing open: count steps, and check Lady Macbeth persuades, Banquo, the ghost, the witches again, Macduff's family and Lady Macbeth's guilt. Ask how Lady Macbeth dies, cold. Redraw the character map from blank, one arrow fix only if needed. Then improve the Macbeth's fear paragraph: 'seem to fear / things that do sound so fair' recalled cold, inside her sentence, one method named. Ask whether the rest of Act 1 Scene 3 was read at home. Map work: never more than one arrow per message on a first build. London and The Prelude items from 23 Oct stay for the next poem block.
Two closing lines not written; spellings ghost, friend, decide, panics not run; Macbeth's fear paragraph not improved; ten-step plot re-ask after rebuild not run; Lady Macbeth's death not asked back cold; whether Act 1 Sc 3 was read at home not asked.
| Topic | Name | Change | Evidence recorded |
|---|---|---|---|
| S1.2 | Gap → Gap | 2 Nov, cold on paper, nothing open, 8 min: five boxes drawn not ten, 4 filled, 1 blank, about 4/10 steps (Cawdor and told king; kills king, becomes king; Lady Macbeth 'killed', war; Macbeth killed). Then by narrowed question: Banquo's murder, ghost, witches with 'born of a woman', Macduff's family all right. Stays gap: below 8/10 cold; re-ask not run. | |
| S1.3 | Not started → Gap | opened - taught, confirmed. Six-name map with four verbs: whole task stalled at 8 min ('i can't'); one arrow at a time 4/4 right with cues. Redraw from blank, 5 min: 6/6 people, 3/4 arrows (Banquo 'doubts' pointed at Macbeth, fixed to the witches when asked). No fresh independent item; motive and arc not touched. | |
| K6.1 | Gap → Gap | 2 Nov slips: freind, gult, horridle, night meres, persuses, whitchs x2, becoumes, killes. Right: ghost, Banquo's with apostrophe, Macduff's. Cold spellings of ghost, friend, decide, panics not run at the stop. Stays gap. |